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		<title>Humans Did That</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Sep 2010 13:26:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Wings of flowing air Amaze me As they roll with flair In the sky And fly Straight Past Their engines roaring, their blades turning Fast, oh so fast. Humans did that. Tags: Photography, Poem Related posts The Soft Light of Christ(mas) (0) The Job Sessions are Completed (0) The Anniversary of Freedom (0) Rebirth: A <a href='http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2010/09/07/humans-did-that/'>[...]</a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a title="Thrills in the Sky by Points North, on Flickr" href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/pario/4892556078/" target="_blank"><img class="alignleft" style="margin: 2px 3px; border: 1px solid black;" src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4134/4892556078_9c505a1290.jpg" alt="Thrills in the Sky" width="500" height="337" /></a></p>
<p><font face="georgia" color="blue"><em>Wings of flowing air<br />
Amaze me<br />
As they roll with flair<br />
In the sky<br />
And fly<br />
Straight<br />
Past<br />
Their engines roaring, their blades turning<br />
Fast, oh so fast.<br />
Humans did that.</em></font></p>
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		<title>February. A Poem.</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 02:25:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Shireen</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>February. In the old days, snow so deep</p>
<p>&#160;&#160; you sunk up to your knees, slipped and slid</p>
<p>&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160; on the unshovelled walks.</p>
<p>February. In the new days, no snow,</p>
<p>&#160;&#160; that counts anyway.</p>
<p>February. In the old days, cold so sharp</p>
<p>&#160; you huddled in your fur coat, your wool coat,</p>
<p>&#160;&#160;&#160; your scarf and toque and mitts.</p>
<p>February. In the new days, not cold,</p>
<p>&#160; for a Canuck anyway.</p>
<p>February. In the old days, the short-long month</p>
<p>&#160;&#160; between Christmas and Easter,</p>
<p>&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160; an excuse to party.</p>
<p>February. In the new days, the month</p>
<p>&#160;&#160; with Family Day.</p>
<p>February. The lost month</p>
<p>&#160;&#160;&#160; that nobody wants and</p>
<p>&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160; nobody celebrates.</p>
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		<title>Falling Down the Highway, A Poem</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Aug 2009 02:50:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Shireen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A hard-yet-easy poetry prompt for this Wednesday by Robert Brewer for Poetic Asides. It&#8217;s the hard things that happen to us that lend themselves most easily to poetry, not necessarily to writing good poetry but just writing it period. &#8220;&#8230;write a poem about something you&#8217;ve been through. For instance, you may have been through a <a href='http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/08/05/falling-down-the-highway-a-poem/'>[...]</a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A hard-yet-easy poetry prompt for <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,E0FB3A6A-A78A-4464-AF17-257EA0082FD1.aspx#35a6d0bc-462c-4793-816f-d6d668a04e3b" target="_blank">this Wednesday</a> by Robert Brewer for Poetic Asides. It&#8217;s the hard things that happen to us that lend themselves most easily to poetry, not necessarily to writing good poetry but just writing it period.</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;&#8230;write a poem about something you&#8217;ve been through. For instance, you may have been through a divorce, a car wreck, bankruptcy, detention, or the flu. Please make the something you&#8217;ve been through the title of your poem and go from there.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>So I did.</p>
<p>&#8220;Falling Down the Highway&#8221;</p>
<p>Tires hum on the blacktop<br />
as lights in darkened buildings flash by<br />
and overhead the giant sign warns<br />
of the impending steep hill<br />
we crest the unknown and fall<br />
down the slope towards the cars all lined<br />
up before the round green light<br />
way down at the bottom where a street<br />
crosses the highway we&#8217;re on<br />
lights flash red one after one<br />
like dominoes going down and Normand brakes<br />
we accelerate down against the seatbelts<br />
but they pull back pull back pull back pull<br />
we kiss the backs of the seats snugly<br />
as we stop centimetres short of the car ahead<br />
one two&#8230;I release my breath and continue<br />
writing in my head only it&#8217;s not over<br />
the shock of contact stops time<br />
my left arm reaches up to cradle my once-<br />
damaged neck in time for another<br />
the shock of contact stops thoughts<br />
I stare out the windshield whole<br />
cause of the seatbelt and see a white<br />
car flash past on the shoulder.</p>
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		<title>Rebirth: A Poetry Video</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Jun 2009 15:32:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Shireen</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I started by wanting to put together a video of <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/06/12/chopper-trip-into-the-st-elias-mountain-range-yukon/">my helicopter trip</a> over the Kaskawulsh Glacier near Vulcan Mountain, the one I took when I was visiting the Yukon. But something wasn&#8217;t adding up, and then I realised it needed words. I found a <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/20/pad-challenge-poem-no-20-rebirth/">poem</a> from my poem-a-day challenge that fits with what these photos evoke in me, and I had to decide: text or spoken. Well, I was too tired and too impatient to figure out how to line up the spoken words with the right photos and have music too in MovieMaker, so I went with text. I&#8217;m familiar with working with text in a video anyway.</p>
<p>And so a poetry video was born.</p>
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		<title>If I had a Million Dollars&#8230; A Haiku</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jun 2009 23:37:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today&#8217;s poetry challenge on Poetic Asides blog was what would you do if you suddenly got a million dollars. I know what I&#8217;d do! &#8220;Lightness&#8221; Million dollars flutter down;my shoulders unburdenfrom the debt. Technorati Tags: Poetry Tags: Poem Related posts Rebirth: A Poetry Video (0) Poetic Asides Poem Prompt: &#8220;Don&#8217;t You&#8230;&#8221; (0) PAD Challenge: The <a href='http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/06/17/if-i-had-a-million-dollars-a-haiku/'>[...]</a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today&#8217;s <a target="_blank" href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,AA28EA24-036C-4947-BD71-8EBD96D7D754.aspx#a324b314-c8f8-4684-b64d-164a30e47d27">poetry challenge</a> on Poetic Asides blog was what would you do if you suddenly got a million dollars. I know what I&#8217;d do!</p>
<p>&#8220;Lightness&#8221;</p>
<p>Million dollars flutter down;<br />my shoulders unburden<br />from the debt.</p>
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		<title>Poetic Asides Poem Prompt: &#8220;Don&#8217;t You&#8230;&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 15 May 2009 15:00:17 +0000</pubDate>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a target="_blank" href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/">Poetic Asides</a> blog by Robert E Brewer on the Writer&#8217;s Digest website runs Wednesday poetry prompts. Today, I find myself drawn to <a target="_blank" href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,37176ee8-e861-452e-9f92-183708b9dde7.aspx#commentstart">this week&#8217;s prompt</a> and feeling the need to opine poetically &#8212; as well as in <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/05/14/politicians-tramp-on-my-unfolding/">venting prose</a> &#8212; about yesterday&#8217;s policy announcements designed to harm the most vulnerable under the guise of good-for-the-taxpayer or good-for the-environment rhetoric.</p>
<p>&#8220;Don&#8217;t You See?&#8221;</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t you see the need<br />in your citizens as you<br />raise their rates to heights<br />unscalable by them, their<br />families, their care-<br />givers. Don&#8217;t you see the need<br />in your citizens<br />as you drop their treatment claim<br />dollars to lows so<br />cruel they&#8217;d be better off<br />dead.</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t you see?</p>
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		<title>PAD Challenge: The End</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 01 May 2009 15:21:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Shireen</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m finding it hard to believe that the 30-day poem-a-day challenge by Robert E Brewer of the Writer&#8217;s Digest <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides" target="_blank">Poetic Asides</a> blog is over. Waaahhhh. And phew. It was easy some days, very difficult others, a total drag on a few with me sitting there fingers poised over keyboard with not a word in my head. But this <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/01/pad-challenge-poem-no-1-life/">poem-a-day</a> challenge has shown me that I can do more than I thought with my writing.</p>
<p>And now <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,8273da80-d280-43ac-87b7-416c3ae5071c.aspx">the judging begins</a>. Robert and Tammy, with the help of guest screeners, will whittle each day down to a Top 5 list. These will be passed on to guest judges, who will select the top poem for each day. Robert will then go through the remaining 120 poems (2nd to 5th for each day) and select 20 out of that bunch. That plus the top 30 will round out the Top 50 eBook. We won&#8217;t know who and which poems will make it into the Top 50 eBook until July 2nd. It&#8217;s going to be a loooonnnng wait, which I&#8217;ll probably promptly forget for the next couple of months as is my wont. He will make other announcements about the PAD challenge on that day too. Since about 700 of us posted a poem every day and more than 25,000 poems were posted in total, it&#8217;s going to be a difficult task for him!</p>
<p>Thank you to everyone who read my poetry and especially to those who commented on my poems here, on Facebook, and privately. I appreciated your kind words very much. Your encouragement kept me going!</p>
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		<title>PAD Challenge: Poem No. 30 &#8220;Hands&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 30 Apr 2009 21:10:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Shireen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today&#8217;s prompt for Writer&#8217;s Digest Poetic Asides poem-a-day challenge is to write a farewell poem. It&#8217;s tough to say goodbye, especially when one is feeling dead tired. But I gave it a shot. And so endeth a very interesting month for me. I discovered I can write poems, some good, some yawn, some frustrating to <a href='http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/30/pad-challenge-poem-no-30-hands/'>[...]</a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today&#8217;s prompt for <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writersdigest.com">Writer&#8217;s Digest</a> Poetic Asides <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/01/pad-challenge-poem-no-1-life/">poem-a-day</a> challenge is to <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,24b9d300-194d-456d-b2e4-0835427140df.aspx" target="_blank">write a farewell poem</a>. It&#8217;s tough to say goodbye, especially when one is feeling dead tired. But I gave it a shot. And so endeth a very interesting month for me. I discovered I can write poems, some good, some yawn, some frustrating to form, some flowing from the pen, some surprising me at the end. It&#8217;s been good.</p>
<p>&#8220;Hands&#8221;</p>
<p>Hands, those appendages at the end of our arms,<br />
full of nerves and muscles and vessels,<br />
they declare our sussurations outwards.</p>
<p>They grow from pudgy and clenched<br />
to long and lean;<br />
they heal by touch and stroke;<br />
they caress the loved one&#8217;s skin and<br />
hold with love the child within;<br />
they whisper comfort and slap awake;<br />
they applaud and pump and do create.</p>
<p>And today they wave farewell.</p>
<p>Farewell.</p>
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		<title>PAD Challenge: Poem No. 29 &#8220;Never Found&#8221;</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shireen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today&#8217;s prompt for Writer&#8217;s Digest Poetic Asides poem-a-day challenge is easier than yesterday&#8217;s. Phew. We are to title our poems &#8220;Never (blank)&#8221; and fill in the blank with a word or phrase. I chose a word &#8220;Found.&#8221; &#8220;Never Found&#8221; Where did my blue-eyed boy go? He&#8217;s lost in his mind, Lost to his soul. Who <a href='http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/29/pad-challenge-poem-no-29-never-found/'>[...]</a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today&#8217;s prompt for <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writersdigest.com">Writer&#8217;s Digest</a> Poetic Asides <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/01/pad-challenge-poem-no-1-life/">poem-a-day</a> challenge is easier than yesterday&#8217;s. Phew. We are to <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,060f4fd7-232f-4b40-bc7a-adbc9226c50f.aspx" target="_blank">title our poems &#8220;Never (blank)&#8221;</a> and fill in the blank with a word or phrase. I chose a word &#8220;Found.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;Never Found&#8221;</p>
<p>Where did my blue-eyed boy go?<br />
He&#8217;s lost in his mind,<br />
Lost to his soul.<br />
Who will make him whole?</p>
<p>Where did my blonde-haired boy go?<br />
He&#8217;s split in two and<br />
Three and four.<br />
Who will make him whole?</p>
<p>Where did my blue-eyed boy go?<br />
He&#8217;s needed here at home,<br />
He&#8217;s wanted by his clan.<br />
Who will make us whole?</p>
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		<title>PAD Challenge: Poem No. 28 &#8220;Look Upon Your Vain Hope, King of Pride&#8221;</title>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today&#8217;s prompt for <a target="_blank" href="http://www.writersdigest.com">Writer&#8217;s Digest</a> Poetic Asides <a target="_blank" href="http://jeejeebhoy.ca/2009/04/01/pad-challenge-poem-no-1-life/">poem-a-day</a> challenge is to <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CommentView,guid,711c514f-0821-4114-bf02-53b535462ec2.aspx" target="_blank">write a sestina</a>, or since it&#8217;s Two for Tuesday, write about a <a href="http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/Sestina6x6339+Thats+Math.aspx" target="_blank">sestina</a>.</p>
<p>I didn&#8217;t think I could do this, but gave it a whirl anyway and got caught up in the challenge. I&#8217;ve started each line with a capital letter so if the long lines wrap, you&#8217;ll know it from the beginning lowercase letters! After I posted to the poem-a-day challenge page, I saw two words in the fifth stanza that should&#8217;ve been &#8220;our&#8221; to continue the concept of &#8220;I&#8221; and &#8220;us&#8221; that I began with. Oh well, fixed it here.</p>
<p>&#8220;Look Upon Your Vain Hope, King of Pride&#8221;</p>
<p>I gaze upon the stars<br />
At night, their rays like tears<br />
Of joy, of wonder that explode<br />
Into grief upon seeing Leviathan<br />
Roam upon the earth, that creature the demons cheer,<br />
That God created for our misery.</p>
<p>We, who inhabit this place of misery,<br />
Look to the heavens, to the stars<br />
For their cheer<br />
To dry our tears<br />
That the great Leviathan<br />
Did gloat to see in us explode.</p>
<p>And now our anger roils, it explodes,<br />
Cloaking our misery<br />
That he feeds on, that fat Leviathan.<br />
But our fury reflects off him to feed the stars,<br />
Who shed drops and drops of fiery tears<br />
Upon us to bring back in us a spark of cheer.</p>
<p>Oh, so much angst in us does need cheer<br />
To succor, else our hearts explode<br />
Into crimson gushers flooding the land, drowning our tears.<br />
Oh, such misery<br />
They do see, the stars<br />
When they look upon the proud work of Leviathan.</p>
<p>He curls his tail, he purses his mouth, he squeezes his body round his happy prey, does Leviathan.<br />
He feasts on complacent pride and cheers<br />
To see from their mighty fortresses, the constellations&#8217; impotent fury in his starring<br />
Role on earth, his domain of rock formed when God the universe did explode.<br />
He looks fondly on the banquet his happy prey creates from our misery,<br />
He and them slaking their thirst with our tears.</p>
<p>From the heavens, drop by drop, claret and choler tears<br />
Fizzle and burn the armour of the fearless Leviathan.<br />
But he heeds nothing but what he wants: misery.<br />
His enemy is cheer,<br />
And he quickly explodes<br />
It back up to the stars.</p>
<p>But the stars dry their tears<br />
As God, as Ahura Mazda explodes the vain Leviathan.<br />
And all we who suffer cheer to see the end of our misery.</p>
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