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Today’s prompt for Poetic Asides poem-a-day challenge is the phrase “The problem with [blank].”

It was raining today, so that was quite the inspiration, that plus some old unfinished poetry.

The problem with rain
Is the cold
Seeping into your bones
The drops
Easing down your face
The wet
Flattening your hair
The rain
Mimicking your weeping, your soughs, your limp body marrying with the land.

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 Posted by at 8:09 pm on April 3, 2009  Tagged with:
  • Marg

    That just sums up today completely!

  • Marg

    That just sums up today completely!

  • Shireen

    Isn’t that rain amazing? It just won’t stop!

  • olive

    Love your poems except for the CN Tower one.

  • olive

    Love your poems except for the CN Tower one.

  • Shireen

    Thanks!!! Um, even for not liking my poor CN Tower ode. 🙂